Why the first 10 pages? 

On an industry level often times the first 10 pages are all you have to get someone interested in your script. 

From a writing standpoint, the first 10 pages are crucial in getting your audience emotionally invested in your protagonist and their world.

Is there a limit of times I can resubmit those same 10 pages with my edits?

If you make edits to your 10 pages after our first feedback session over food, you may resubmit the edited 10 pages up to 2 more times at no additional cost.

Does alcohol count as food? 

I love alcohol, but I’d appreciate having food too so I can be in the best headspace when I give you my feedback! 

What if we can’t meet up in person? 

I accept Grub Hub Gift Cards at a $15 value!

Does 10 pages include the title page?

Nope! 10 pages starts the moment your story begins.

Can you help me sell my script or find me an agent/manager?

Unfortunately as much as I want you to make a ton of money and thank me in your Oscar speech, I cannot guarantee any of those things for your script. However, I can help you tell the best version of your story possible. After all, having a great story is the first big hurdle!

What happens if I want you to read a new draft but I edited the first 10 pages you already read? 

If you choose to work with me on additional pages, I’ll count the first 10 pages free. So for instance, if you’ve already met with me over food to discuss your first 10 pages and you give me your full 30 page script with the first 10 pages newly edited, I will only charge you for 20 pages. 

How far are you willing to travel? 

Due to Covid-19 I will be holding all feedback sessions online or over the phone.  

Is there a minimum on food? 

$15.00!

What script formats do you accept? 

Screenplays and digital content should be in Courier, 12 point font. Plays can be in any font as long as they’re 12 point. 

Is this offer available for the first 10 pages per person or per script?

Per script!